Divide railtrail duration by 2 ( it's way too long as it is now )
The obituary message is in a weird place and the font is a bit tiny maybe ( might make more sense to have it on the left )

And for the love of god, don't use that shitty music.

Otherwise it looks really nice.

pros:

really smooth (fps)
not overly edited - clear
not too dark

cons:

frags were...meh,but i guess this comes with being sucky at video games as you said yourself :P
music wasn't the greatest
intro needs more work,too basic

Frag message was in a really weird place, and really small.
You're still using my pink gib sparks (I need to change those)
The sound seems a tiny bit out of sync.
The railtrailtime is way too long. Even 1000+ seems a little long for a frag video.
The music wasn't very bad (I had no real problem with it), but it definitely wasn't good. At all.
(I'm listing off the problems here, just fyi.)

Other than that it seems fine, I guess. Editing was really plain ie. non existent, but that's the more favorable extreme over editing the shit out of it.

Yeah, its your config, I didn't really change much. :D I kind of just started capping with the intention of testing things out. Except then I got excited when it actually looked pretty good and had 30gigs of footage that I didn't feel like re-doing. Frag message got there by accident, and I kind of liked it at the time. It does look weird though. I might just get rid of entirely, I haven't really been using any clips where the kill wasn't visible and obvious anyway.

Sound sync is just youtube being gay I think, it gave me some kind of warning to that effect when I uploaded. Its a test upload, so I just ran with it.

Editing is mostly just boring because I was learning as I went. Towards the end of it I started getting the hang of things though, so I might add some stuff. I just hate when movies are so edited you can't tell what was going on. I was kind of trying to show the entire situation as opposed to just showing the frag, but in retrospect I should probably cut it up a bit more since my gameplay isn't exactly impressive. :p

Open to suggestions for other music, I like the song personally but it apparently isn't very popular. Could just be me having shitty taste, since I don't really listen to that type of music very much.

music is really meh and pls (!) fast forward non-combat scenes


oh btw, tamponvampire is _by far_ the most disgusting nick i've ever seen (and i played basera3 10 years ago)

whats the songs name?

More Lazers (edIT/Glitch Mob)

bad frags = bad fragmovie

what the fuck

lol @ tyryl's comment

ty for the feedback. Going to start it over again and spend a lot more time digging through my 800 or so mb of demos so that I can be more picky about what I end up using. Maybe spend more than just an afternoon on it this time. :p

^^

i would just play more quake so you can actually make better frags
i understand that you want to make a movie(but i dont think the esr users want to see those frags)

The idea was for a bunch of us to do movies for the different games that we play, just to help promote our clan. There's some bigger picture here website/sponsor-wise that I'm not really aware of, I just know that I was asked to make a movie.

No worries, next attempt will be better. I do have better frags, I just didn't think about it much and didn't dig too deep to find them. Mostly just grabbed stuff from the first 4 or 5 demos I went through.